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nonhuman
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2 years, 5 months ago by nonhuman
Ok so I have two songs and I don’t think they are very good these are the songs1. A song that has no name by Nonhuman The sun comes up in the east and sets in the west If your my north then I’m your south When you’re up I am down I can’t tell which way is which when your around I tried to tell you I love you But you messed up my directions So I wrote a song that has no name To tell you that I love in so many ways You told me I was your world Just to take it away the next day So now I’m laying here wondering what I did wrong but you always say it’s not you it’s me then say your going to change but never do I tried to tell you I love you But you messed up my directions So I wrote a song with no name To tell you I love you in so many ways You say I’m a moon and your the sun Just to leave me the next day You rip out my heart and crush in my face Now your with a new girl to disappoint I tried to tell you I love you But you messed up my directions So I wrote a song with no name To tell you I love you in so many ways You lied to me You tried my patients Now I’m leaving without you So goodbye knowing that you’ll never find anyone as good as me 2. Stars by nonhuman Looking up and the stars Laying in the grass with you beside me Just looking at the beautiful sky And all I hope is for you to love me like I love you Looking up a sky full of stars,full of stars It makes me think life is forever, forever When I look in your eyes all I see are the stars You come over to my house Through pebbles at my window I climb dow my tree to meet you in the park just to watch the stars All I think of is you and me together forever Looking up at a sky full of stars, full of stars It makes me think life is forever,forever When I look in your eyes all I see are the stars You kiss me goodnight I climb into my room When I fall asleep All I dream about is you ,me ,and the stars Looking up at a sky full of stars, full of stars It makes me think life is forever, forever When I look in your eyes all I see are the stars But you left me for another girl And now I’m cry And laying down to wonder what went wrong Because we each other so much But it’s meant to be so quick little goodbye from me Plz give your opinion negative or positive |
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dracula
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2 years, 5 months ago by dracula
I think your songs or great!! You should make more…
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friz_ay
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2 years, 5 months ago by friz_ay
Omgosh, love these, I used to write songs, I want to get back into it now 💕
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Maria-Cruz
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2 years, 5 months ago by Maria-Cruz
What’s the tune to?
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Ann0skar
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2 years, 5 months ago by Ann0skar
They are both great! I love them 🤍
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Mooncore
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2 years, 5 months ago by Mooncore
They are really good! ❤️ 😍
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nonhuman
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2 years, 5 months ago by nonhuman
@dracula I’m working on more
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nonhuman
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2 years, 5 months ago by nonhuman
@friz_ay you should it’s really fun and easy
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nonhuman
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2 years, 5 months ago by nonhuman
@Maria-Cruz I don’t have a time yet still trying
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nonhuman
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2 years, 5 months ago by nonhuman
@Ann0skar thx 😊
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nonhuman
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2 years, 5 months ago by nonhuman
@Mooncore thx 😊
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dracula
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2 years, 5 months ago by dracula
@nonhuman i'm so exicted to hear them!!
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nonhuman
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2 years, 5 months ago by nonhuman
@dracula I’ll make another forum post with the new song or songs
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dracula
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2 years, 5 months ago by dracula
@nonhuman cool!!!
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